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Saturday, October 17, 2015
Revised Conclusion
Since I completely revised my introduction, it's time to do the same for my conclusion. Keeping in mind Student's Guide strategies and tips, I rewrote my conclusion in an attempt to make it more effective and striking. You can view my original and new conclusion here.
My new conclusion uses the tactic of "Circling Back," which gives it a more cohesive feel. I open by going back to the new narrative I use in the new introduction. This helps create an image that can be visualized more easily, as opposed to my original conclusion, which didn't have a lot of imagery. In the original conclusion I tried to answer the question "So what?" as well as imply the "Looking Foward" tactic, but I think that those are both more effective in my new conclusion, because I framed them within the context of the intro's narrative. I'm not sure if I like the very last sentences, so I'll probably need to revise those some more.
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